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A Poem I wrote
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A Poem I wrote
So this is a poem I wrote in bed at like 2 AM over the summer. I couldn't stop thinking so I decided to just put it in the words, got an idea to make a poem, and went with it. It took me a total of like 5 minutes. I'm posting this because I still really like it and have no other place to post it, and.. yeah.. maybe someone else will find that they share the same thoughts. I would normally feel embarrassed at this type of thing, but then I realized, the worst that can happen is someone doesn't like it. I can live with that. Oh i forgot to mention this was my fist poem I've ever wrote, I quite enjoyed reading it the day after, let me know if maybe I should start writing some more of these. Smile 



I look up and the starry night I can see
When I leave earth what will be left of me?
In all the books, we're told earth is our destiny,
Yet I can't help but wonder what lies in the galaxies.

How will I stand out as an individual human being?
Will I act on creativity and ideas exempt from fear of completing?
How shall I live unconcerned with others conceding?
What is life without ever taking a beating,
For fear of public recognition is only self-defeating
What is the purpose, if never looking for deeper meaning.

So alas, I look up at the night sky and must ponder the stars
For every hardship I face, I am reminded who we are
A product of evolution, and we've come so far
What only concerns myself will keep me barred
So when I die I know impact was made, if I could manage to change the stars.
Which is better:
To die with ignorance, or to live with intelligence?

Truth doesn't accommodate to personal opinions.
The choice is yours. 
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There is God and there is man, it's only a matter of who created whom

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The more questions you ask, the more you realize that disagreement is inevitable, and communication of this disagreement, irrelevant.
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A Poem I wrote - by Heat - October 22, 2015 at 10:45 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by bennyboy - October 23, 2015 at 12:22 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - October 23, 2015 at 12:41 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by bennyboy - October 23, 2015 at 11:12 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by robvalue - October 23, 2015 at 1:22 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Brian37 - October 23, 2015 at 11:17 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Aoi Magi - October 23, 2015 at 11:46 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Edwardo Piet - October 23, 2015 at 6:28 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - October 23, 2015 at 6:36 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Athene - October 23, 2015 at 6:37 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - October 23, 2015 at 6:46 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Edwardo Piet - October 23, 2015 at 6:38 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - October 23, 2015 at 6:45 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by TrueChristian - October 29, 2015 at 6:09 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by drfuzzy - October 29, 2015 at 6:12 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Edwardo Piet - October 29, 2015 at 6:14 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Aoi Magi - October 29, 2015 at 6:22 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Homeless Nutter - October 29, 2015 at 6:25 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by lisah - November 11, 2015 at 6:34 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - November 11, 2015 at 7:32 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Brian37 - November 13, 2015 at 6:22 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - November 13, 2015 at 9:11 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Edwardo Piet - October 30, 2015 at 7:38 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Edwardo Piet - November 11, 2015 at 9:19 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Magilla - November 13, 2015 at 10:58 pm

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