RE: A poem I wrote last night
July 30, 2014 at 11:53 pm
(This post was last modified: July 30, 2014 at 11:56 pm by *Deidre*.)
(July 30, 2014 at 10:44 pm)Thumpalumpacus Wrote: Good job, Deidre.
Every time I try to write a song or poem about my lack of faith, it comes out sounding like polemics. I like that you caught a more understated approach.
writing songs is harder, in my opinion. thank you!
(July 30, 2014 at 10:05 pm)ignoramus Wrote:(July 30, 2014 at 9:58 pm)GalacticBusDriver Wrote: There once was a girl who believed
Who said she could not be deceived
But, then she awoke from her sleep
Was no longer a blind sheepThen Deidre became on of us!
Next!
what do you think?