(September 21, 2016 at 2:05 am)Yeauxleaux Wrote: To be fair I kinda see your point, the prose does get a bit much sometimes. Especially when it's a loooong rambling paragraph going into minutely specific detail describing something relatively irrelevant, when it could probably get the shebang done in 5 lines.Beware the hungry writer who feasts upon his own words....*points at self in mirror*
I remember one chapter where he spent three lengthy paragraphs intricately describing the food at a feast, and I was just thinking "really, you're giving the food this much? Is it really that relevant it needs a page and a half? Ok."
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Consider me a satellite forever orbiting,
I knew the rules but the rules did not know me, guaranteed." - Eddie Vedder