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A poem I wrote last night
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#21
RE: A poem I wrote last night
July 30, 2014 at 10:44 pm
Good job, Deidre.

Every time I try to write a song or poem about my lack of faith, it comes out sounding like polemics. I like that you caught a more understated approach.

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RE: A poem I wrote last night
July 30, 2014 at 11:53 pm (This post was last modified: July 30, 2014 at 11:56 pm by *Deidre*.)
(July 30, 2014 at 10:44 pm)Thumpalumpacus Wrote: Good job, Deidre.

Every time I try to write a song or poem about my lack of faith, it comes out sounding like polemics. I like that you caught a more understated approach.

writing songs is harder, in my opinion. thank you! Smile
(July 30, 2014 at 10:05 pm)ignoramus Wrote:
(July 30, 2014 at 9:58 pm)GalacticBusDriver Wrote: There once was a girl who believed
Who said she could not be deceived
But, then she awoke from her sleep
Was no longer a blind sheepThen Deidre became on of us!


Next!

what do you think? Big Grin
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RE: A poem I wrote last night
July 31, 2014 at 12:17 am
There once was a plumber from Leigh
Who was plumbing a girl by the sea
She said "Stop your plumbing, I think someone's coming!"
Said the plumber, still plumbing "It's me!"
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RE: A poem I wrote last night
July 31, 2014 at 12:48 am
All this time I spent reading your poem, when I could have been drinking another beer, no, I was only joking, good little poem.Great
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RE: A poem I wrote last night
July 31, 2014 at 12:51 am
(July 31, 2014 at 12:48 am)psychoslice Wrote: .Great
You are giving approval to your own period.
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RE: A poem I wrote last night
July 31, 2014 at 1:19 am
(July 31, 2014 at 12:51 am)ShaMan Wrote:
(July 31, 2014 at 12:48 am)psychoslice Wrote: .Great
You are giving approval to your own period.

Cheers!
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RE: A poem I wrote last night
July 31, 2014 at 1:24 am
Bloody hell, now blokes are cebrating their periods too!
What's this world coming to?
No God, No fear.
Know God, Know fear.
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RE: A poem I wrote last night
July 31, 2014 at 1:47 am
(July 31, 2014 at 1:24 am)ignoramus Wrote: Bloody hell, now blokes are cebrating their periods too!
What's this world coming to?

He He, that a good one, I'll celebrate anything if there's a drink involved lol.
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RE: A poem I wrote last night
July 31, 2014 at 3:36 am
(July 31, 2014 at 1:47 am)psychoslice Wrote:
(July 31, 2014 at 1:24 am)ignoramus Wrote: Bloody hell, now blokes are cebrating their periods too!
What's this world coming to?

He He, that a good one, I'll celebrate anything if there's a drink involved lol.

happy to celebrate your period with you guys, but please:
No "Bloody Marys"

Confusedhock:
No God, No fear.
Know God, Know fear.
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RE: A poem I wrote last night
July 31, 2014 at 4:14 am
There was a young lad from Japan
Who wrote verses that just didn't scan.
Said, 'I know its not right,
And rather a plight,
'But I have this annoying habit of trying to get as many syllables into the last line of the poem as I possibly can.'

Boru
‘But it does me no injury for my neighbour to say there are twenty gods or no gods. It neither picks my pocket nor breaks my leg.’ - Thomas Jefferson
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