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Inspirational thought of the day
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 (November 14, 2015 at 5:04 am)ignoramus Wrote: Y U B bastard 4? I like the sound little bubbles of saccharine soap water make when they pop?
The fool hath said in his heart, There is a God. They are corrupt, they have done abominable works, there is none that doeth good.
Psalm 14, KJV revised edition
  (November 16, 2015 at 8:23 am)bennyboy Wrote:You act like I am trying hard to make a poem, and have been working on it for weeks.(November 16, 2015 at 7:08 am)Quantum Wrote: I like the sound little bubbles of saccharine soap water make when they pop? This is my 2nd poem ever, and both of them so far have been done in around 5-20 minutes each and didn't originally start out as poems. In fact, even when I finished, I didn't intend for this to be a poem, it's also not like im claiming I am any great poet or anything. Which is better:
To die with ignorance, or to live with intelligence?
Truth doesn't accommodate to personal opinions.
The choice is yours.
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There is God and there is man, it's only a matter of who created whom
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The more questions you ask, the more you realize that disagreement is inevitable, and communication of this disagreement, irrelevant.
Next time, if it's not to much to ask, can we get something dark and disturbed? Sunshine and lolly pops kind of puts me off a little. (urp)
I don't have an anger problem, I have an idiot problem.
RE: Inspirational thought of the day
November 16, 2015 at 11:15 pm
(This post was last modified: November 16, 2015 at 11:16 pm by Heat.)
(November 16, 2015 at 10:38 pm)mh.brewer Wrote: Next time, if it's not to much to ask, can we get something dark and disturbed? Sunshine and lolly pops kind of puts me off a little. (urp)It's not really about being happy or sad, it's about a realization of the world we live in. The message may have been lost, but I was trying to represent that we should strive to see the earth from space, because from space, we are not divided, we are all on the same planet, and by those means, all equal. But maybe, I don't know, I would like to write more poems but got the intention that this one wasn't too good. 
Which is better:
To die with ignorance, or to live with intelligence?
Truth doesn't accommodate to personal opinions.
The choice is yours.
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There is God and there is man, it's only a matter of who created whom
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The more questions you ask, the more you realize that disagreement is inevitable, and communication of this disagreement, irrelevant.
 (November 16, 2015 at 10:38 pm)mh.brewer Wrote: Next time, if it's not to much to ask, can we get something dark and disturbed? Sunshine and lolly pops kind of puts me off a little. (urp) You asked for it: Inked Ravens of Despair Claw Holes in the Arse of the World's Mind. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zxru0HDs5_g RE: Inspirational thought of the day
November 17, 2015 at 2:05 am
(This post was last modified: November 17, 2015 at 2:06 am by bennyboy.)
(November 16, 2015 at 9:42 pm)heatiosrs Wrote:(November 16, 2015 at 8:23 am)bennyboy Wrote: By "little bubbles of saccharine soap water" do you mean amateur poets?You act like I am trying hard to make a poem, and have been working on it for weeks. I'm curious how you go from the urge to scribble down random thoughts, to the Eureka! moment that makes you want to share them in the philosophy forums. Are you fishing for the inevitable kudos that are normally reserved for "special" children but are also extended, at least here, to those who attempt to write creatively? 
(November 17, 2015 at 2:05 am)bennyboy Wrote:Umm no..? If I wanted kudos, i'd try being funny and get much more than actually trying to be intelligent with my posts...(November 16, 2015 at 9:42 pm)heatiosrs Wrote: You act like I am trying hard to make a poem, and have been working on it for weeks. It's a human urge to want to share your ideas with people if you think they are worth sharing and/or can amount to some value or be assigned meaning by others. I wrote this which basically is completely about realizing how to love one and other, not getting touchy, but in other words, that everyone is equal and should be treated that way. Why on earth would I write about that subject for some selfish reason? It may have taken me only 20 minutes to write, but I was pondering it for a good hour prior. Do you automatically just assume the worst in people? Sorry for burdening you with a post in a subsection of a forum you didn't have to click on, read, or post on. My apologies. I will give everyone else the memo that they shouldn't post anything unless it's up to your standards, or else they might get criticized, because god forbid there is anything posted on this forum that people don't like! 
Which is better:
To die with ignorance, or to live with intelligence?
Truth doesn't accommodate to personal opinions.
The choice is yours.
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There is God and there is man, it's only a matter of who created whom
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The more questions you ask, the more you realize that disagreement is inevitable, and communication of this disagreement, irrelevant.
 RE: Inspirational thought of the day
November 17, 2015 at 2:16 am
(This post was last modified: November 17, 2015 at 2:17 am by Reforged.)
I like the poetic structure, even if the content is abit fanciful.
If I squint my eyes I see a pleasing, soft looking brown shape. When I open them fully I see the smelly bastard of a dog that woke me up with its pacing in the middle of the night. We can all make things appear more optimistic by diminishing our senses when faced with the pessimistic. Thats what drugs and alcohol are for. It doesn't mean anything.
"That is not dead which can eternal lie and with strange aeons even death may die."
- Abdul Alhazred. (November 16, 2015 at 9:42 pm)heatiosrs Wrote:(November 16, 2015 at 8:23 am)bennyboy Wrote: By "little bubbles of saccharine soap water" do you mean amateur poets?You act like I am trying hard to make a poem, and have been working on it for weeks. No, don't take it too seriously, your ending was just so theatrical that I couldn't resist sabotaging it a bit . Carry on.
The fool hath said in his heart, There is a God. They are corrupt, they have done abominable works, there is none that doeth good.
Psalm 14, KJV revised edition
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