RE: For Fantasy/Sci-Fiction Lovers: What Makes You Reada Book?11th January 2017, 17:56
(11th January 2017, 16:56)Aoi Magi Wrote:You got it! Those 67 words are all I need. Less is more, no?(11th January 2017, 15:32)Rhondazvous Wrote: Jawan hadn’t been allowed to see his parents in eight years after the powerful Earth mage apprenticed him, and now he never would. They’d been struck down by the deadly purple plague that ravaged Hadley Town. When his master’s magic fails to find a clue to this mystery ailment, Jawan embarks on his own search, and finds himself trapped in a world one billionth his normal size.
I think just the above is fine without the sub-atomic queen and other plot points.