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Need to title a poem, any ideas?
14th June 2010, 08:58
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Need to title a poem, any ideas?
I need a title for my poem, any ideas?

I went to Church and joined a team and grew and felt assigned
They sung some songs to their one and only whom I could never find
For I had my own idea of my one and only whom was merely mortal as I

Their doctrine of sorts knew nothing but vulgarity and shame
But for blind faith and phony adulation, who is one to blame?
Their subtle flues and mindless platitudes tested my proud might
I spoke up and tried such ways but many weren’t nearly contrite

Ignoring all this, I stayed and had much fun
But I couldn’t imagine what that could have done
I taught myself to want to leave as I should have had such desire
For what was keeping me there was nothing but overt mire.
Perspective goes a long way to finding some acceptance.

When I say I don't need salvation, I'm saying I don't need a sky daddy to forgive me for being born.

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14th June 2010, 09:46
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RE: Need to title a poem, any ideas?
your sig makes a apt title:

When I say I don't need salvation, I'm saying I don't need a sky daddy to forgive me for being born.
I used to tell a lot of religious jokes. Not any more, I'm a registered sects offender.
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14th June 2010, 09:49
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RE: Need to title a poem, any ideas?
ey not a bad idea!

you like that huh?
Perspective goes a long way to finding some acceptance.

When I say I don't need salvation, I'm saying I don't need a sky daddy to forgive me for being born.

"We need not a God; just another human being to give life a meaning. For people are truly all people have" author unknown
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14th June 2010, 10:08
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RE: Need to title a poem, any ideas?
It's a bit of a mouthful... but you sure as fuck won't be misunderstood Smile
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15th June 2010, 19:34
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RE: Need to title a poem, any ideas?
(14th June 2010 10:08)Saerules Wrote:  It's a bit of a mouthful... but you sure as fuck won't be misunderstood Smile
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Perspective goes a long way to finding some acceptance.

When I say I don't need salvation, I'm saying I don't need a sky daddy to forgive me for being born.

"We need not a God; just another human being to give life a meaning. For people are truly all people have" author unknown
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