(December 6, 2015 at 10:13 am)DespondentFishdeathMasochismo Wrote:
I got that you felt very strongly about the issue and your revulsion for the woman was apparent. Not bad. Once I read the second contents box is I could imagine the average person raising his or her eyebrows. People could easily go from thinking "Yeah. Fuck that Kim Davis! She is a monster!" to "What hell's wrong with this guy?". The violent imagery was unnecessarily serial-killerish. I don't think you should change your manner of writing/speaking altogether. Maybe dial it back about 20% when you're angry, just to be certain that a good/valid point doesn't get lost.