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Poetry
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Poetry
I think we lack poetry in here, personally I suck at writing it, and absolutely *hated* it in school because it was all forced and unoriginal. But, I appreciate a well written poem, especially when it's on my favourite topic of discussion. I have a few that are actually pro-religion but, given the focus of the forum I'll leave them on the shelf for now but, anyone else wanting to share a poem, do not feel you have to use the same restraints. all are welcome.

I'll start, a poem I found online by a user named Brian37.

Brian37 - How great thour art.

How great thou art,

To let them suffer

Pestulance and famine

And wars that linger



How great thou art

Your ambiguous hands

Threaten with fear

We all be damned



The wallet is love

And you have the gun

Aimed at our heads

Refusing to give

Will make us all burn



What kindly thoughts

To frighten us

To bow to you

Because it's love?



I have a choice

This much is true

Discarding myth

Is that I value



Discard the pitchforks

And halo's due

Just like red noses

And sugarplums too



How great the farce

And fantacy

A D&D game

Deadly reality



How great thou art

To give us this orb

Full of desease

And hateful hords



I know thy name

It is not divine

Tis a creation

Of ancient minds



Thor and Isis

Marduke extinct

Their magical spells

Have the same link



How great thou arnt

And nothing new

History is full

Of claims like you



A day may come

When we Cruise by

A statue of Hubbard

Billions rely



How great thou arnt

In Genisis

You stole your story

From polytheists



Ugartic text

Is older motif

So too the flood

In Gelgimesh



Hardly original

Nor does it prove

That spirts knock up girls

Gabriel "Mary, God is in the mood".



Thot cured an eye

Long before Jesus

Rabbits and hats

Are still slight of hand



How great thou arnt

This human mind

The mental slight

Is the bind



It's fuzzys are warm

And grandious

The lure of a promise

That doesn't exist



How fake thou art

By any name

Apollo to Allah

It's all the same



It's in their heads

And all made up

The past is the present

And they don't give up



How great thou arnt

This tribalism

Leading to death

Over fiction



Magic and myth

In the span of time

Change their colors

But never decline



How great the mind

When set free

From the binds

Of mythology
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Messages In This Thread
Poetry - by Demonaura - March 26, 2009 at 5:49 am
RE: Poetry - by dagda - March 26, 2009 at 11:58 am
RE: Poetry - by leo-rcc - March 26, 2009 at 1:17 pm
RE: Poetry - by bozo - March 26, 2009 at 3:41 pm
RE: Poetry - by dagda - March 27, 2009 at 9:33 am
RE: Poetry - by WWLD - March 26, 2009 at 4:50 pm
RE: Poetry - by Demonaura - March 27, 2009 at 11:40 am
RE: Poetry - by Giff - April 7, 2009 at 6:04 am
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - April 7, 2009 at 8:16 am
RE: Poetry - by Giff - May 11, 2009 at 8:25 am
RE: Poetry - by etogre - May 13, 2009 at 2:43 pm
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - May 13, 2009 at 2:54 pm
RE: Poetry - by Demonaura - May 29, 2009 at 7:06 am
RE: Poetry - by Tabby - May 29, 2009 at 3:03 pm
RE: Poetry - by Giff - May 30, 2009 at 4:01 am
RE: Poetry - by Tabby - May 30, 2009 at 12:39 pm
RE: Poetry - by Giff - May 31, 2009 at 4:46 am
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - July 22, 2009 at 12:30 pm
RE: Poetry - by Rhizomorph13 - July 22, 2009 at 12:48 pm
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - July 22, 2009 at 1:09 pm
RE: Poetry - by Rhizomorph13 - July 22, 2009 at 3:22 pm
RE: Poetry - by Overmars - July 22, 2009 at 1:58 pm
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - July 22, 2009 at 4:40 pm
RE: Poetry - by fr0d0 - July 22, 2009 at 5:13 pm
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - July 22, 2009 at 5:55 pm

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