To circumcise or not to circumcise?

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I try.  Yet I don't see you attempting to write a novel.  Unless you actually are...

I don't post my excerpts here, normally, but here, here's an excerpt from my WiP:

See, that's the difference between you and me.

I wouldn't have read past the first line, and I didn't, of your writing due to the fact that it was a cliche.

As a writer, I have evolved past cliches.