Okay, I'll be super cereal for now. Unfortunately my headphones are garbage, so I already know I'm not hearing all that I'm supposed to be hearing. Pitches are kinda wonky, so I can't tell if there's actually anything off there or not. I'll just go ahead and assume that much is perfect.
I'm not sure if I should criticize the following point or not, because I don't know what you intended. The vocals are a bit distant and not articulated too clearly. With that in mind, I know there are a lot of artists who are going for exactly that for artistic reasons. Think Pearl Jam (who I love). If that's what you intended, then you hit it perfectly.
Overall, I love it. This kind of music tickles me in all the right places.
I'm not sure if I should criticize the following point or not, because I don't know what you intended. The vocals are a bit distant and not articulated too clearly. With that in mind, I know there are a lot of artists who are going for exactly that for artistic reasons. Think Pearl Jam (who I love). If that's what you intended, then you hit it perfectly.
Overall, I love it. This kind of music tickles me in all the right places.
I don't believe you. Get over it.
