Upon 1st listen:
The mixing could be a tad better. I can barely hear the rhythm guitar. Maybe you could add more to the chord progression after the distortion kicks in, perhaps some added rhythm or perhaps throw a few more chords in there.
Upon 2nd listen:
The singer could emphasize the words a tad more to make it sound less mumbly, in the intro. More string bends in the solos would be nice.
Upon 3rd listen:
It needs bass.
Conclusion:
Overall the song is good, it just needs better mixing, more emotion in the solos (especially the first one), and perhaps maybe a tad more added to the rhythm maybe.
The mixing could be a tad better. I can barely hear the rhythm guitar. Maybe you could add more to the chord progression after the distortion kicks in, perhaps some added rhythm or perhaps throw a few more chords in there.
Upon 2nd listen:
The singer could emphasize the words a tad more to make it sound less mumbly, in the intro. More string bends in the solos would be nice.
Upon 3rd listen:
It needs bass.
Conclusion:
Overall the song is good, it just needs better mixing, more emotion in the solos (especially the first one), and perhaps maybe a tad more added to the rhythm maybe.
