I'm hoping you took on board some of the criticisms of your writing from other threads.
The story sounds like a potentially interesting premise.
I don't get why the title of this thread is amongst us girls.
The story sounds like a potentially interesting premise.
I don't get why the title of this thread is amongst us girls.
Are you ready for the fire? We are firemen. WE ARE FIREMEN! The heat doesn’t bother us. We live in the heat. We train in the heat. It tells us that we’re ready, we’re at home, we’re where we’re supposed to be. Flames don’t intimidate us. What do we do? We control the flame. We control them. We move the flames where we want to. And then we extinguish them.
Impersonation is treason.
