I very much enjoyed it, Losty. Why so hard on yourself? I liked these last couple of stanzas in particular:
He's not here to cause harm
He'll give her what she's longed for
A sweet death inside his arms
Winter won’t deny her
Gone today, but not forever
He's not here to cause harm
He'll give her what she's longed for
A sweet death inside his arms
Winter won’t deny her
Gone today, but not forever
Nay_Sayer: “Nothing is impossible if you dream big enough, or in this case, nothing is impossible if you use a barrel of KY Jelly and a miniature horse.”
Wiser words were never spoken.
Wiser words were never spoken.
