Ontological Disproof of God

[Losty]

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Negatio, a personna, informed members, at the very outset, that his writing is fragmentary, fragments, fragmented; and, therefore precisely not a unitary structure, the writing is a sketch composed of discrete lines, a drawing; although, one refrain continually runs through the entireity that is the piece, i.e., that "All determination is negation.".
Reference a re-written version of Part I of the OP, which appears on page 19 #184 of Negatio's thread, for, on page 19 is a very small writing, which is what is being referred to here, and, it is a writing attempted in a style intended to be less abstruse that the OP.
Now, enunciated in the first person, by Duane, the particular human consciousness who writes in the forum as Negatio, Reply to Abaddon:
I absolutely do not entertain the personal project of convincing a series of godless heathens to be atheist.  Your assertion, Abaddon, that such is my purpose is mistaken, and, is a meaningless absurdity.  My personal project in regard to the writing which is, I claim, a destruction of Deity, which destruction
consists in doing what I, and other Americans express by saying : "This is hardball, and, Duane is a real hard hitter !"  I, Duane, want to play, am attempting to play, world wide, hardball, in regard to, for one, the universally accepted notion that Yahweh, Jehovah, and Jesus Christ are considered, world wide, to be Deity.  The hardball is Spinoza's ''...determinatio negatio est...", written nearly four hundred years ago, which formula, when thrown, deftly, within the infeild, can make a triple play, putting out all three runners, i.e., Yahweh, Jehovah, and Jesus Christ. Buddah, and all other deities are not referred to at all...
I, am not an atheist, I am agnostic, and, I have previously declared and described my agnostic optimism to members of the forum; however, via the most powerful three little words extant within the known sapiental universe, I have written what I am claiming to be an indefeasible theoretical destruction of Deity, as Deity is commonly thought to be, across the entire earth, and, the destruction was not done for fun.  The destruction is a deadly serious affair.
Your forum, Abaddon, is simply a portal into the world wide web, where I wanted to cast, to throw, my writing out into the wide world.  I am aiming at the world Abaddon, not at the particular series of atheist persons who constitute your forum, and, I am challenging the world-wide-bullshit whereupon we humans have, mistakenly, for thousands of years, founded our civilizations, i.e., the commonplace idea that written law, set forth by Deity, is efficient to, somehow, cause, or motivate, or move, or set into motion moved, human persons to act, or, to refrain from acting.
You insist, Abaddon, that I am under some necessity of undertaking my writing, and my thinking, in language solely preferable to you.  What became of Duane? Why on earth do you want to drive him out, to banish him, from his own critique ?  You are, thereby, saying that you know  how the treatise can be done better; clearly saying that you could do it far, far better.  You imply that you see an objective lack, i.e., a paper which is ideally cast in a superior fashion which is ''legible''; a paper, which, at this point is somehow an ideal Platonic form, suspended somewhere in ideality, and, you see it clearly.  So, I say, don't tell me about it, do it !  Materialize the present-absent ideally written composition; the correct, legible replacement for mine, which transcends the unitelligibility which is my paper.
So, then, merely telling me about some sketchy absent, yet ideal paper, is bullshit !  Pretend I am from Missouri, show me ! 
Abaddon, you are a radically toughminded person, absolutely, indubitably so.
You write and submit the ideal paper which you claim to see clearly, clearer than I.  Otherwise, concede that I have written a prima facie viable theoretical destruction of Christ. It is your Socratic responsibility to the world; so, do it, do it like I have, in what is actually, at the core, just a few lines...
I love the smell, in the early morning, of the pungent odor of your exotic, destructive, cocktail of :  flippant disparagement; and, of flippant insult; and, of hostility; and of flippant ire !  Thank you. Negatio.

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