RE: The Tunnel of Life
May 28, 2020 at 2:04 pm
(This post was last modified: May 28, 2020 at 2:07 pm by WinterHold.)
(May 27, 2020 at 6:56 pm)BrianSoddingBoru4 Wrote: Ode To A Bee, by BrianSoddingBoru4, AKA BSB, AKA Boru, AKA Leonidas Heppelmeyer
I was sitting in the garden
Wearing my sequined speedo
And gumboots.
Not a care in the worlds.
Chomping on a fresh nectarine
In the manner of the Scythians
Who could teach us so much
But we rarely listen.
Suddenly, I felt a jab
Near my middle.
I doubled over and
Spied my bellybutton.
It was all puffed out
Instead of all puffed in.
And it was covered by
A battered fuselage.
Poor bee.
He meant me no harm.
He just ran
Out of fuel.
Boru
Your names suck so bad I didn't even read through..
It's like "Leonidas Heppelmeyer, the BullShit".
(May 28, 2020 at 9:37 am)The Grand Nudger Wrote: As good as any other angsty teen missive. Have you considered writing something optimistic with a positive outlook. If nothing else, to play with a different style? Or, maybe, for the challenge?
The scariest thing is to have candidates for the "monster in the tunnel".
You know, Saudi royals, American army chumps, Trump, Putin, Chinese operative...and the list goes on.
Crawling in the dark
No voice no bark
