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Light in the Abyss

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Light in the Abyss
Paraselene Offline Donators
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RE: Light in the Abyss
July 24, 2013 at 12:29 am (This post was last modified: July 24, 2013 at 12:30 am by Paraselene.)
I noticed a few grammatical and spelling mistakes. You also might want to work on your tense, choosing either past or present but not both. Otherwise, good job.
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Light in the Abyss

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Light in the Abyss - by bladevalant546 - July 24, 2013 at 12:08 am
RE: Light in the Abyss - by Paraselene - July 24, 2013 at 12:29 am
RE: Light in the Abyss - by bladevalant546 - July 24, 2013 at 12:31 am
RE: Light in the Abyss - by Fruity - July 24, 2013 at 12:45 am

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