RE: Light in the Abyss
July 24, 2013 at 12:29 am
(This post was last modified: July 24, 2013 at 12:30 am by Paraselene.)
I noticed a few grammatical and spelling mistakes. You also might want to work on your tense, choosing either past or present but not both. Otherwise, good job.
"What a little moonlight can do." ~ Billie Holiday


