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Light in the Abyss

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Light in the Abyss
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RE: Light in the Abyss
July 24, 2013 at 12:31 am
(July 24, 2013 at 12:29 am)Maelstrom Wrote: I noticed a few grammatical and spelling mistakes. You also might want to work on your tense. Otherwise, good job.

Yea my girlfriend said the same thing, she wrote out what I need to improve upon. I welcome criticism, so developing my writing skill take a few slaps. Smile
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Light in the Abyss

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Light in the Abyss - by bladevalant546 - July 24, 2013 at 12:08 am
RE: Light in the Abyss - by Silver - July 24, 2013 at 12:29 am
RE: Light in the Abyss - by bladevalant546 - July 24, 2013 at 12:31 am
RE: Light in the Abyss - by Fruity - July 24, 2013 at 12:45 am

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