(October 14, 2013 at 5:59 am)Tonus Wrote: Have you read the Bible???
Yes: it's full of flat, stock characters performing rote actions, with a magic system that it literally a deus ex machina.

Not to mention the contradictory nature of the lead character...
"YOU take the hard look in the mirror. You are everything that is wrong with this world. The only thing important to you, is you." - ronedee
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