(April 24, 2015 at 10:15 am)Judi Lynn Wrote: Well, you missed capitalization of both bullets.
Since the bullets were a continuation of another sentence, rather than sentences in their own right, there's no need for either a capital letter at the beginning or punctuation at the end.
Quote:As far as the Oxford comma goes, I put that in your bullet. It's in red.
Nearly but not quite.
Sum ergo sum