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Quite intriguing, I'd say. The lack of detailed explanation for 'The End' always works better than describing it at length IMO, and you've made a good start grounding the main character with his human weaknesses and strengths. Not a huge amount that I can really say as it's very short, but I rather like your writing style and setup so far
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New novel hopeful - by Silver - July 7, 2015 at 12:36 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Silver - July 8, 2015 at 5:51 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Iroscato - July 8, 2015 at 6:31 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Aoi Magi - July 8, 2015 at 7:16 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Silver - July 9, 2015 at 1:57 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Silver - July 27, 2015 at 2:28 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Clueless Morgan - July 27, 2015 at 11:45 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Silver - July 28, 2015 at 11:20 pm
RE: New novel hopeful - by Clueless Morgan - July 29, 2015 at 6:03 pm
RE: New novel hopeful - by Thumpalumpacus - July 29, 2015 at 1:39 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Lemonvariable72 - July 29, 2015 at 2:05 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Thumpalumpacus - July 29, 2015 at 5:18 pm
RE: New novel hopeful - by Silver - July 30, 2015 at 1:58 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Jenny A - July 30, 2015 at 2:04 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Silver - July 30, 2015 at 2:18 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Lemonvariable72 - July 30, 2015 at 5:34 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Clueless Morgan - July 30, 2015 at 10:58 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Silver - August 2, 2015 at 12:44 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Clueless Morgan - August 3, 2015 at 10:55 am
RE: New novel hopeful - by Clueless Morgan - August 3, 2015 at 11:22 am
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