(March 22, 2023 at 11:21 am)arewethereyet Wrote:(March 22, 2023 at 10:17 am)Tomato Wrote: I was reading back on some earlier chapters to make sure I had something right. The storyline escalates really quickly between chapters thirty and forty.
That's what happens when you leave out that other 40+ chapters.
Well, there's nothing else to add.
Editing rarely involves fleshing out with my writing. It's mostly just grammar and spelling fixes.
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