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Poetry
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RE: Poetry
Oki Doki,

I tried a re-punctuated version with both in though. And then maybe it's better punctuated this way but with no usage of machine, both might work though. And I actually quite like "Machine" with "Malfunction" and "Robot" with "Wrong", and I'm not leaving out robot that way Tongue:

Malfunction

We are machines, we might malfunction
We are robots, we might go wrong

Perhaps we should be warned
That it’s not just to be scorned
When what we do, we don’t just spawn.
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Poetry - by Demonaura - March 26, 2009 at 5:49 am
RE: Poetry - by dagda - March 26, 2009 at 11:58 am
RE: Poetry - by leo-rcc - March 26, 2009 at 1:17 pm
RE: Poetry - by bozo - March 26, 2009 at 3:41 pm
RE: Poetry - by dagda - March 27, 2009 at 9:33 am
RE: Poetry - by WWLD - March 26, 2009 at 4:50 pm
RE: Poetry - by Demonaura - March 27, 2009 at 11:40 am
RE: Poetry - by Giff - April 7, 2009 at 6:04 am
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - April 7, 2009 at 8:16 am
RE: Poetry - by Giff - May 11, 2009 at 8:25 am
RE: Poetry - by etogre - May 13, 2009 at 2:43 pm
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - May 13, 2009 at 2:54 pm
RE: Poetry - by Demonaura - May 29, 2009 at 7:06 am
RE: Poetry - by Tabby - May 29, 2009 at 3:03 pm
RE: Poetry - by Giff - May 30, 2009 at 4:01 am
RE: Poetry - by Tabby - May 30, 2009 at 12:39 pm
RE: Poetry - by Giff - May 31, 2009 at 4:46 am
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - July 22, 2009 at 12:30 pm
RE: Poetry - by Rhizomorph13 - July 22, 2009 at 12:48 pm
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - July 22, 2009 at 1:09 pm
RE: Poetry - by Rhizomorph13 - July 22, 2009 at 3:22 pm
RE: Poetry - by Overmars - July 22, 2009 at 1:58 pm
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - July 22, 2009 at 4:40 pm
RE: Poetry - by fr0d0 - July 22, 2009 at 5:13 pm
RE: Poetry - by Edwardo Piet - July 22, 2009 at 5:55 pm

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