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Freedom is as tasty as berries...and a creepy figure on the wall
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RE: Freedom is as tasty as berries...and a creepy figure on the wall
(December 1, 2018 at 1:23 am)AtlasS33 Wrote:
(November 30, 2018 at 4:44 am)Cherub786 Wrote: Yes I understand that, I’m just asking generally if you have any interest in theology and metaphysics.

No; I don't understand people who ignore a whole OP to ask me personal questions.
I expect personal questions to be sent to me in a PM, or maybe asked genuinely to me in the middle of a discussion.

What do you think about the poem?
You can laugh. You can joke. You can give kudos. That's what you can do to any post here. But you can never ignore my post and walk over it to open an investigation with me.

Are you sure you understand?

(November 30, 2018 at 5:57 am)BrianSoddingBoru4 Wrote: Salami.  I like cured meats.

Boru

I think there is Halal Salami.

How is it a personal question?

As for the poem, it's not very poetic

Poems aren't just about clever rhymes. There's a lot more depth to genuine poetry
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RE: Freedom is as tasty as berries...and a creepy figure on the wall
(December 1, 2018 at 1:34 am)Cherub786 Wrote:
(December 1, 2018 at 1:23 am)AtlasS33 Wrote: No; I don't understand people who ignore a whole OP to ask me personal questions.
I expect personal questions to be sent to me in a PM, or maybe asked genuinely to me in the middle of a discussion.

What do you think about the poem?
You can laugh. You can joke. You can give kudos. That's what you can do to any post here. But you can never ignore my post and walk over it to open an investigation with me.

Are you sure you understand?


I think there is Halal Salami.

How is it a personal question?

As for the poem, it's not very poetic

Read it again to know how is it personal.
I respect your opinion; I need to work on my skills more then.

(December 1, 2018 at 1:34 am)Cherub786 Wrote:
Poems aren't just about clever rhymes. There's a lot more depth to genuine poetry

Great opinion. I gave you kudos.
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#13
RE: Freedom is as tasty as berries...and a creepy figure on the wall
(December 1, 2018 at 1:38 am)AtlasS33 Wrote:
(December 1, 2018 at 1:34 am)Cherub786 Wrote: How is it a personal question?

As for the poem, it's not very poetic

Read it again to know how is it personal.
I respect your opinion; I need to work on my skills more then.

(December 1, 2018 at 1:34 am)Cherub786 Wrote:
Poems aren't just about clever rhymes. There's a lot more depth to genuine poetry

Great opinion. I gave you kudos.

Okay, so I asked you if you have an interest in theology or metaphysics.
Pray tell how is that a personal question?
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RE: Freedom is as tasty as berries...and a creepy figure on the wall
(November 29, 2018 at 11:32 pm)AtlasS33 Wrote: Freedom is as tasty as berries
Mixed with a little whiskey and weed, right?

With a twist of juicy red cherries
Taking you to a place way high

But it only lasts as your strength carry
It only lasts for a blink of an eye

You wake up, awed in a hurry
The wall is hiding a creepy spy

The crazy maniac is taking your life for money
A wolf in the hide of sheep, a cold killing disgusting lie

They sent him to butcher you
With a chainsaw or a bonesaw.
He has no hands but a devil's claw
So sharp, so eager to blow

Wake up. There's a garden made with your blood.
Flowers are red, and you are dead.

Rest in peace, for every victim died at the hands of Saudi Arabia defending freedom. And every other place in the world under tyranny and oppression

Really, AtlasS33, why do you go against Islam by writing poetry? Why? You are obviously disrespecting prophet Muhammad who despised the poets “Those who go astray follow the poets” (sura 26.224); https://quranx.com/26.224

Also in the collection of traditions known as the Mishkat, Muhammad is said: “A belly full of purulent matter is better than a belly full of poetry.” source
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