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Countdown to the next username change
RE: Countdown to the next username change
I was obviously focusing on the wrong course of enabling the character to return. That has been rectified.
"What a little moonlight can do." ~ Billie Holiday
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Exploring the fae realm with my writing. Been doing some research, but still going to put my own spin on the world building.
"What a little moonlight can do." ~ Billie Holiday
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Since I like to rebel when it comes to my writing structure, I'm following through with an idea.

Two main characters. Their perspectives fluctuate from chapter to chapter.

Chapter One: first person present pov
Chapter Two: third person past pov
Chapter Three: first person present pov
Chapter Four: third person past pov
Etc...

The one character continually uses first person every other chapter while the other character uses third person every other chapter.
"What a little moonlight can do." ~ Billie Holiday
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Was working on a chapter, and realized the ending of a previous chapter has to be changed.
"What a little moonlight can do." ~ Billie Holiday
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The first chapter, if anyone wants to read it:

https://foxaire.blogspot.com/2024/12/ret...1.html?m=1
"What a little moonlight can do." ~ Billie Holiday
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Something I've learned as a writer is that, despite what is traditionally taught, is how it's perfectly possible for a narrative to contain both present and past tenses.

Because I'm a rebel.
"What a little moonlight can do." ~ Billie Holiday
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Wrote the first line of chapter four before I even finished the third, because I didn't want to forget it.
"What a little moonlight can do." ~ Billie Holiday
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Been spending most of the night trying to figure out this scene.
"What a little moonlight can do." ~ Billie Holiday
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(December 18, 2024 at 7:04 pm)Silver Wrote: Wrote the first line of chapter four before I even finished the third, because I didn't want to forget it.

You wrote the first line before finishing the third line?

Too clever for your own good.

Tongue

Playing Cluedo with my mum while I was at Uni:

"You did WHAT?  With WHO?  WHERE???"
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RE: Countdown to the next username change
(December 18, 2024 at 9:53 pm)The Valkyrie Wrote:
(December 18, 2024 at 7:04 pm)Silver Wrote: Wrote the first line of chapter four before I even finished the third, because I didn't want to forget it.

You wrote the first line before finishing the third line?

Too clever for your own good.

Tongue

Oh, you. Blush
"What a little moonlight can do." ~ Billie Holiday
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