RE: Would you?
October 11, 2015 at 12:34 am
(This post was last modified: October 11, 2015 at 12:35 am by Athene.)
An opening sentence that's jarring is good. It gets the reader's attention right away...makes them feel they won't have to wade through the usual boring set-up details to get to the action.
I'd go with it, too.
I'd go with it, too.