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A Poem I wrote
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RE: A Poem I wrote
October 23, 2015 at 6:37 pm (This post was last modified: October 23, 2015 at 6:38 pm by Athene.)
That was very good, especially considering that you haven't really written any poetry before.  My only suggestion is to be less concerned with rhyming. Sometimes it can be distracting and disrupt the flow...it's all about the flow.
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A Poem I wrote - by Heat - October 22, 2015 at 10:45 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by bennyboy - October 23, 2015 at 12:22 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - October 23, 2015 at 12:41 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by bennyboy - October 23, 2015 at 11:12 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by robvalue - October 23, 2015 at 1:22 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Brian37 - October 23, 2015 at 11:17 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Aoi Magi - October 23, 2015 at 11:46 am
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Edwardo Piet - October 23, 2015 at 6:28 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - October 23, 2015 at 6:36 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Athene - October 23, 2015 at 6:37 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - October 23, 2015 at 6:46 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Edwardo Piet - October 23, 2015 at 6:38 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - October 23, 2015 at 6:45 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by TrueChristian - October 29, 2015 at 6:09 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by drfuzzy - October 29, 2015 at 6:12 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Edwardo Piet - October 29, 2015 at 6:14 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Aoi Magi - October 29, 2015 at 6:22 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Homeless Nutter - October 29, 2015 at 6:25 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by lisah - November 11, 2015 at 6:34 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - November 11, 2015 at 7:32 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Brian37 - November 13, 2015 at 6:22 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Heat - November 13, 2015 at 9:11 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Edwardo Piet - October 30, 2015 at 7:38 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Edwardo Piet - November 11, 2015 at 9:19 pm
RE: A Poem I wrote - by Magilla - November 13, 2015 at 10:58 pm

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