RE: A Poem I wrote
November 11, 2015 at 6:34 pm
(This post was last modified: November 11, 2015 at 6:36 pm by lisah.)
(October 29, 2015 at 6:09 pm)TrueChristian Wrote: Young man there is heaven or hell after you die
Keep it in mind!
Then just keep that in mind
when you're being a jerk
or simply unkind.
(October 22, 2015 at 10:45 pm)heatiosrs Wrote: So this is a poem I wrote in bed at like 2 AM over the summer. I couldn't stop thinking so I decided to just put it in the words, got an idea to make a poem, and went with it. It took me a total of like 5 minutes. I'm posting this because I still really like it and have no other place to post it, and.. yeah.. maybe someone else will find that they share the same thoughts. I would normally feel embarrassed at this type of thing, but then I realized, the worst that can happen is someone doesn't like it. I can live with that. Oh i forgot to mention this was my fist poem I've ever wrote, I quite enjoyed reading it the day after, let me know if maybe I should start writing some more of these.![]()
I look up and the starry night I can seeWhen I leave earth what will be left of me?In all the books, we're told earth is our destiny,Yet I can't help but wonder what lies in the galaxies.
How will I stand out as an individual human being?Will I act on creativity and ideas exempt from fear of completing?How shall I live unconcerned with others conceding?What is life without ever taking a beating,For fear of public recognition is only self-defeatingWhat is the purpose, if never looking for deeper meaning.
So alas, I look up at the night sky and must ponder the starsFor every hardship I face, I am reminded who we areA product of evolution, and we've come so farWhat only concerns myself will keep me barredSo when I die I know impact was made, if I could manage to change the stars.
I really like it!
I miss the days when I was inspired to write. Keep writing!
"My imagination makes me human and makes me a fool; it gives me all the world and exiles me from it."
Ursula K. Le Guin
Ursula K. Le Guin


