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[bennyboy]

Hey, thanks, man.  I actually write it all while using some nice Sennheiser headphones, but I found out just recently that it all sounds drastically different on my 10" speakers.  I was actually thinking about starting a thread to see if anyone has any tips or secrets for mastering, like what to use to listen when you're doing it.  Plus, I hadn't even realized how to master the track very well in the software when I posted this.  I figured out a few tricks that make it sound better.

I'm by no means a master, as you can see when I put some of my own music up for critique. But the internet now has pretty much everything you could learn, ever, about any kind of music or music production. The internet has exploded with people who know every little trick in the book and will take hours of their time to make sure you can know it, too!

As for that first note, I see what you mean.  I'd have to go back to the song to see what exactly was going on there and what I was thinking.

My guess is that you played the piano part live rather than sequenced. Having a humanized timing for a note repeated through the entire song is something you have to do with great, great, caution IMO.