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Deidre's Ramblings
RE: Deidre's Ramblings
The Trip (poem by me)

Once upon a time
there was a naive girl
she followed her heart
she traveled the world

She went to Paris and Madrid
sampling food and wine
chatting up strangers
believing all their lines

The men were quite kind
spewing what she wanted to hear
they were charming and smart
but unfortunately, quite cavalier

Every airplane trip
gave her a rush
who would she meet this time?
who would be her next crush?

Yet, her trips grew dull
as ten years piled on
she woke up one day
realizing, what she had done

She relentlessly kept looking
for that one special thing
where could it be?
what was she missing?

All along her journeys
she hoped it was him
one man after the next
but, the chances grew slim

One day, as she packed
for yet another long trip
she fidgeted and frowned
biting her lip

She was tired of traveling
it got her quite down
so many cities and towns
she was never around

Her mother and father
were becoming older and distant
she lost track of time
in what seemed to be, an instant

Traveling the world
lost her so much
where did her friends go?
they stopped keeping in touch

Her peace and happiness
was always right here
not in a faraway land
but, up close and clear

She made an atonement
to those she had ignored
spending time in the present
she had so much in store

No more boats and planes
her mind was made up
if she were to find love
she would have to offer up

Her time and kindness
and cease chasing the wrong things
she was grateful to be home
where she finally stopped yearning

How can this be?
she thought, with a smile
my entire life
I've been lost in the miles

Once upon a time
there was a naive girl
she followed her heart
and the path led to her.


*I've been in a poetry mood, lately. This poem isn't about me, but it's really more of a metaphor as to how we all get busy chasing the wrong things, wrong people...when all we have been looking for, is within us.
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Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 12, 2018 at 12:35 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by J a c k - May 12, 2018 at 2:55 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by robvalue - May 12, 2018 at 3:02 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by brewer - May 12, 2018 at 7:12 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by ignoramus - May 12, 2018 at 8:23 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 12, 2018 at 11:39 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 12, 2018 at 5:17 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 13, 2018 at 1:11 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 14, 2018 at 10:57 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - May 14, 2018 at 11:00 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 14, 2018 at 11:05 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - May 14, 2018 at 11:08 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 14, 2018 at 11:13 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - May 14, 2018 at 11:17 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 18, 2018 at 7:21 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 19, 2018 at 1:47 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Fireball - May 19, 2018 at 3:11 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 19, 2018 at 6:46 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Fireball - May 19, 2018 at 7:59 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by SaStrike - May 19, 2018 at 7:08 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 19, 2018 at 10:39 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Fireball - May 19, 2018 at 11:48 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by brewer - May 20, 2018 at 1:17 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 20, 2018 at 7:01 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Industrial Atheist - May 20, 2018 at 10:11 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - May 20, 2018 at 10:16 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 20, 2018 at 10:34 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - May 20, 2018 at 10:40 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 22, 2018 at 10:10 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 24, 2018 at 10:38 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 27, 2018 at 2:58 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 31, 2018 at 5:49 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - May 31, 2018 at 6:11 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 31, 2018 at 6:25 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - May 31, 2018 at 6:29 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Angrboda - May 31, 2018 at 7:02 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 31, 2018 at 9:03 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Angrboda - May 31, 2018 at 9:08 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - May 31, 2018 at 9:20 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 1, 2018 at 10:20 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by SaStrike - June 2, 2018 at 12:20 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - June 2, 2018 at 12:06 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 3, 2018 at 10:52 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 7, 2018 at 11:51 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 9, 2018 at 10:32 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by brewer - June 10, 2018 at 12:17 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 10, 2018 at 2:47 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by brewer - June 10, 2018 at 2:53 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 10, 2018 at 3:13 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by SaStrike - June 11, 2018 at 6:04 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 12, 2018 at 8:34 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 17, 2018 at 12:27 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - June 17, 2018 at 1:49 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Grand Nudger - June 17, 2018 at 1:17 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - June 17, 2018 at 1:21 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 17, 2018 at 5:40 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 18, 2018 at 8:42 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Kernel Sohcahtoa - June 19, 2018 at 9:41 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 20, 2018 at 8:43 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Industrial Atheist - June 20, 2018 at 9:45 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 19, 2018 at 6:16 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - June 19, 2018 at 6:48 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 19, 2018 at 7:30 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - June 19, 2018 at 7:33 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 19, 2018 at 7:58 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - June 19, 2018 at 8:03 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 21, 2018 at 9:14 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 23, 2018 at 2:00 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Jello - June 23, 2018 at 7:27 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 24, 2018 at 12:30 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Jello - June 24, 2018 at 5:55 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - June 24, 2018 at 6:02 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Jello - June 24, 2018 at 9:15 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 24, 2018 at 6:20 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 24, 2018 at 4:52 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - June 24, 2018 at 6:21 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 24, 2018 at 6:21 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - June 24, 2018 at 6:33 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 25, 2018 at 7:59 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Angrboda - June 25, 2018 at 4:54 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 25, 2018 at 6:19 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 25, 2018 at 10:35 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Fireball - June 25, 2018 at 10:55 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 25, 2018 at 10:58 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Fireball - June 26, 2018 at 9:16 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 26, 2018 at 11:33 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - June 26, 2018 at 11:43 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Industrial Atheist - June 25, 2018 at 10:55 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - June 25, 2018 at 11:09 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Industrial Atheist - June 26, 2018 at 8:10 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 26, 2018 at 7:56 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 27, 2018 at 10:06 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by brewer - June 27, 2018 at 10:44 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by energizer bunny - June 29, 2018 at 5:10 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 29, 2018 at 8:36 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - June 29, 2018 at 3:51 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 29, 2018 at 4:08 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - June 27, 2018 at 10:07 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 27, 2018 at 10:09 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 28, 2018 at 8:08 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Succubus - June 29, 2018 at 5:20 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Fireball - June 28, 2018 at 8:43 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 29, 2018 at 7:02 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - June 29, 2018 at 4:10 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 29, 2018 at 4:11 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - June 29, 2018 at 4:14 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - June 30, 2018 at 12:50 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - July 4, 2018 at 12:30 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - July 4, 2018 at 12:52 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - July 4, 2018 at 10:57 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - July 11, 2018 at 11:00 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Fireball - July 12, 2018 at 12:09 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - July 12, 2018 at 1:22 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by brewer - July 12, 2018 at 8:49 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - July 12, 2018 at 6:19 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Foxaèr - July 12, 2018 at 6:21 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - July 12, 2018 at 6:46 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - July 13, 2018 at 7:07 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Fireball - July 13, 2018 at 7:14 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by Succubus - July 13, 2018 at 9:27 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - July 13, 2018 at 9:28 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - July 15, 2018 at 5:20 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - July 17, 2018 at 10:11 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by EgoDeath - July 18, 2018 at 1:37 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - July 18, 2018 at 8:12 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Industrial Atheist - July 18, 2018 at 9:17 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - July 18, 2018 at 4:21 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - July 27, 2018 at 11:27 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - July 28, 2018 at 5:42 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Industrial Atheist - August 4, 2018 at 3:48 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by energizer bunny - July 28, 2018 at 3:04 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by brewer - July 28, 2018 at 7:58 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - July 28, 2018 at 10:28 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - August 2, 2018 at 10:16 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - August 4, 2018 at 10:44 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - August 4, 2018 at 1:05 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - August 4, 2018 at 1:57 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - August 5, 2018 at 1:34 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - August 12, 2018 at 12:51 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - August 20, 2018 at 11:35 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - August 21, 2018 at 9:11 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - September 4, 2018 at 10:06 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - September 4, 2018 at 10:30 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by The Valkyrie - September 4, 2018 at 10:41 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - September 5, 2018 at 7:18 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - September 8, 2018 at 6:55 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - September 29, 2018 at 2:27 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - October 3, 2018 at 8:46 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - October 16, 2018 at 1:27 pm
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - October 19, 2018 at 11:43 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - October 19, 2018 at 11:49 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - November 12, 2018 at 12:58 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - November 20, 2018 at 12:39 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - November 20, 2018 at 12:40 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - November 20, 2018 at 12:44 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - November 20, 2018 at 12:46 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - November 20, 2018 at 12:49 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by MysticKnight - November 20, 2018 at 12:51 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - November 20, 2018 at 12:54 am
RE: Deidre's Ramblings - by *Deidre* - December 13, 2018 at 10:41 am

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