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[Mystic]

The Quran shows were it not for God repelling some humans by others, the earth would be in a state of chaos, and there would be no freedom of religion or expression. Although the countries who waged War against Germany did many evil things as well during the war like cause a famine and hunger in other countries by taking their food, the soldiers who fought were doing it to stop a great evil. 

And to me, the sad thing is, that great evil is soon going to rule the world if we remain asleep and it's going be fascism but all in the name of tolerance and freedom gone to extreme.

dude, keep that in the religious forum bro. This is arts and the OP was asking for a poetry critique not a sermon

Bro he is saying there is nothing sacred in war. I thought, I would mention how I disagree.  The earth has witnessed blood after blood, martyrs after martyrs, all to keep whatever non-chaos justice and freedom it has from my perspective or Quranic perspective.

Just by sheer desire saying there is nothing sacred in war, doesn't make it's sacred position go away, and it's belittling the blood of martyrs.