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RE: Feedback appreciated
November 21, 2018 at 10:14 pm
I'm going to be harsh.

You've managed to put down some interesting ideas, and to rhyme.

But I can't get the meter to work out no matter how I emphasize the words. It seems a bit amateurish to me tbh.
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Feedback appreciated - by Mr.Obvious - November 19, 2018 at 9:22 am
RE: Feedback appreciated - by Brian37 - November 19, 2018 at 9:27 am
RE: Feedback appreciated - by Mr.Obvious - November 19, 2018 at 9:53 am
RE: Feedback appreciated - by tackattack - November 19, 2018 at 11:14 am
RE: Feedback appreciated - by Mr.Obvious - November 19, 2018 at 11:27 am
RE: Feedback appreciated - by Brian37 - November 19, 2018 at 11:21 am
RE: Feedback appreciated - by tackattack - November 19, 2018 at 12:12 pm
RE: Feedback appreciated - by Mr.Obvious - November 19, 2018 at 12:52 pm
RE: Feedback appreciated - by MysticKnight - November 19, 2018 at 12:38 pm
RE: Feedback appreciated - by Brian37 - November 19, 2018 at 1:02 pm
RE: Feedback appreciated - by MysticKnight - November 19, 2018 at 1:04 pm
RE: Feedback appreciated - by tackattack - November 19, 2018 at 1:04 pm
RE: Feedback appreciated - by MysticKnight - November 19, 2018 at 1:06 pm
RE: Feedback appreciated - by tackattack - November 19, 2018 at 1:18 pm
RE: Feedback appreciated - by Mr.Obvious - November 20, 2018 at 8:06 pm
RE: Feedback appreciated - by tackattack - November 20, 2018 at 8:36 pm
RE: Feedback appreciated - by Mr.Obvious - November 21, 2018 at 2:31 am
RE: Feedback appreciated - by Mr.Obvious - November 21, 2018 at 4:53 am
RE: Feedback appreciated - by tackattack - November 21, 2018 at 7:22 am
RE: Feedback appreciated - by bennyboy - November 21, 2018 at 10:14 pm
RE: Feedback appreciated - by Mr.Obvious - November 22, 2018 at 1:51 am
RE: Feedback appreciated - by J a c k - November 22, 2018 at 1:55 am

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