(October 8, 2019 at 7:53 pm)Brian37 Wrote:(October 8, 2019 at 7:15 pm)BrianSoddingBoru4 Wrote: Last line ruined that joke.
Know when to stop.
Boru
How did I ruin that joke? I if I were a seal I wouldn't want someone offering me a club sandwich.
You like being beaten to death with a club? I don't know about you, but that hardly sounds like fun.
You ruined it because 'Club sandwich' is the punchline. Traditionally, this is where jokes are meant to stop. It's actually a pretty good joke, you just told it badly.
Boru
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