Hey everyone. I feel almost bad for not returning to the site sooner. High school life is tedious and trivial. I'd like to just jump back into the swing of things like I was never gone. I've been working on something quite far-fetched and ambitious. I plan on making a book. Whether or not my scatterbrained notes will ever see the light of day is still up in the air. But before I get to deep into it, I'd like some feedback on it. I'll just put a decent excerpt from my work thus far. Please be brutally honest, and glad to be back 
Note that this is also a very rough draft, and I will most likely revise many of my thoughts
"This world is and has always been the same since its very conception. Every facet of human existence in an endless downward spiral. As obvious a vile and deteriorating race we are, a surprising many are oblivious to this. Whether they just sport a large amount of ignorance , or intentionally turn away, the blunders of man are inexplicably apparent. The true and honest innovators are hopelessly over-shadowed. Many a theists believe man as god's greatest blunder. On the contrary, the mere conception of god is by far man's greatest mistake. For centuries many factions of humans have fought for the validity of there deities. All of which vary in purpose, behavior, strength, etc. Of course an individual would not dare even begin to question the beliefs they were brainwashingly raised on. Not only would peers chant blasphemy, but they would feel as if they're turning against there own countrymen. It is no trifling matter to question ones own foundations. Many find it too bothersome to even ponder. Of course this entire inquiry is up to the individual. Whether or not they continue these inquiries till revelation is but a product of there ambitious mind.
Note that this is also a very rough draft, and I will most likely revise many of my thoughts "This world is and has always been the same since its very conception. Every facet of human existence in an endless downward spiral. As obvious a vile and deteriorating race we are, a surprising many are oblivious to this. Whether they just sport a large amount of ignorance , or intentionally turn away, the blunders of man are inexplicably apparent. The true and honest innovators are hopelessly over-shadowed. Many a theists believe man as god's greatest blunder. On the contrary, the mere conception of god is by far man's greatest mistake. For centuries many factions of humans have fought for the validity of there deities. All of which vary in purpose, behavior, strength, etc. Of course an individual would not dare even begin to question the beliefs they were brainwashingly raised on. Not only would peers chant blasphemy, but they would feel as if they're turning against there own countrymen. It is no trifling matter to question ones own foundations. Many find it too bothersome to even ponder. Of course this entire inquiry is up to the individual. Whether or not they continue these inquiries till revelation is but a product of there ambitious mind.
-Only with the ultimate knowledge of all things will man have come to know himself. For things are but the boundaries of man. -> Friedrich Nietzsche
