I wish I could write in English. I just am at a loss for words like that. I prefer to write in Spanish and I have a poem about leaving religion.
I liked your story, blade.
The only thing I noticed (which Maelstrom said, too) was the tenses. You can fix that easy. When reading someone else's writing it's easier to find these things. My sister does that for me Free editorial! Bam!
I liked your story, blade.
The only thing I noticed (which Maelstrom said, too) was the tenses. You can fix that easy. When reading someone else's writing it's easier to find these things. My sister does that for me Free editorial! Bam!
Pointing around: "Fuck you, fuck you, fuck you, you're cool, fuck you, I'm out!"
Half Baked
"Let the atheists come to me, and stop keeping them away, because the kingdom of heathens belongs to people like these." -Saint Bacon
Half Baked
"Let the atheists come to me, and stop keeping them away, because the kingdom of heathens belongs to people like these." -Saint Bacon
