(June 5, 2010 at 7:16 pm)Paul the Human Wrote: Horrific events can make a story more emotionally investing, in my opinion.
I'm definitely not short on horrific events. My concern is just with the age of the victims and the fact that I can't blame it on necessity if anyone complains: If I take it out, it doesn't alter the course of the plot... but where's the fun in that?



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