(June 8, 2010 at 6:28 am)Saerules Wrote:LastPoet Wrote:Well, if the you want that character to be the bad guy, i think that is a great appeal to emotion on that character.
It seems nobody likes my suggestions I suppose that's a sure sign I should never write a novel
Well, just because we don't like it doesn't mean you shouldn't write anything. Here, people are used to think, so if at the end of the book, the main character prays real hard and win, its a sure sell (Deus Ex Machina).