RE: View my Website.
July 31, 2015 at 11:56 am
(This post was last modified: July 31, 2015 at 12:04 pm by Exian.)
Well, I don't mean to criticize your creation, hell, I don't even know how to approach it, let alone dig far enough in to judge it on any substantial level. The story could be amazing for all I know. And I think that's my point. I can only get so close before I'm turned away, so I can only judge the cover. That's a problem.
You may be happy with the design, but it's hard for me to take it seriously when it doesn't appear to have been takn seriously by the creator. I know that you love this story and character (supposing you're not a Poe), but I only know that by what you've said, not by what you've done.
I mean...
...this makes me think you're joking.
ETA: I'm always hesitant to criticize something as harshly as I have here on the off chance that this is your honest to goodness best effort. Normally, I'd blindly encourage all attempts at art no matter the quality, because I like to see people hone what will become a craft. But there is also the pitfall of being too close to the trees to see the forest (errmm..yeah, I think thats how it goes), so sometimes you have to give people the step back they need.
You may be happy with the design, but it's hard for me to take it seriously when it doesn't appear to have been takn seriously by the creator. I know that you love this story and character (supposing you're not a Poe), but I only know that by what you've said, not by what you've done.
I mean...
...this makes me think you're joking.
ETA: I'm always hesitant to criticize something as harshly as I have here on the off chance that this is your honest to goodness best effort. Normally, I'd blindly encourage all attempts at art no matter the quality, because I like to see people hone what will become a craft. But there is also the pitfall of being too close to the trees to see the forest (errmm..yeah, I think thats how it goes), so sometimes you have to give people the step back they need.
I can't remember where this verse is from, I think it got removed from canon:
"I don't hang around with mostly men because I'm gay. It's because men are better than women. Better trained, better equipped...better. Just better! I'm not gay."
For context, this is the previous verse:
"Hi Jesus" -robvalue
"I don't hang around with mostly men because I'm gay. It's because men are better than women. Better trained, better equipped...better. Just better! I'm not gay."
For context, this is the previous verse:
"Hi Jesus" -robvalue