Alright, I see you took some criticism to heart and changed the website a tad, so I watched a few videos.
I gotta be honest, I found them bizarre and nightmarish. I realize that it isn't easy to do 3D animations, and to a certain degree you have achieved something here, which you should be very proud of, BUT you should know that this is not what anyone would call a finished product. You're probably having a blast making these things, but you're not going to find many people willing to pay money for what amounts to Pixar story boards.
The voice work sounds very much like an automation. An automation that's being made to read aloud in class.
You seem to be serious about this and I think that's your saving grace, as you'll be less likely to give up. My advice to you would be to look at what you've made so far, not as a finished product, but as rough drafts and works in progress. You have a computer, do some How-to googling: Voice overs, story boarding, story telling. Find out what other people are doing that makes them successful and do a few mimics. Lets get that cart behind the horse.
I gotta be honest, I found them bizarre and nightmarish. I realize that it isn't easy to do 3D animations, and to a certain degree you have achieved something here, which you should be very proud of, BUT you should know that this is not what anyone would call a finished product. You're probably having a blast making these things, but you're not going to find many people willing to pay money for what amounts to Pixar story boards.
The voice work sounds very much like an automation. An automation that's being made to read aloud in class.
You seem to be serious about this and I think that's your saving grace, as you'll be less likely to give up. My advice to you would be to look at what you've made so far, not as a finished product, but as rough drafts and works in progress. You have a computer, do some How-to googling: Voice overs, story boarding, story telling. Find out what other people are doing that makes them successful and do a few mimics. Lets get that cart behind the horse.
I can't remember where this verse is from, I think it got removed from canon:
"I don't hang around with mostly men because I'm gay. It's because men are better than women. Better trained, better equipped...better. Just better! I'm not gay."
For context, this is the previous verse:
"Hi Jesus" -robvalue
"I don't hang around with mostly men because I'm gay. It's because men are better than women. Better trained, better equipped...better. Just better! I'm not gay."
For context, this is the previous verse:
"Hi Jesus" -robvalue
