RE: View my Website.
July 31, 2015 at 7:40 pm
(This post was last modified: July 31, 2015 at 7:41 pm by Exian.)
I haven't even watched the preview Tibs mentioned and I got a very strong pedophile sense from the character. That's why I think you should redesign him. Three times is not a lot or unusual.
I saw him singing a song to a little girl in her bedroom. It would be much less disturbing if he didn't have the size and proportions of an adult male. And that's just getting you out of pedo territory, he still has to be fun to look at.
I haven't watched everything you've made this far, but another thing that was too static was your camera. Get some natural movement in that thing. Doing that with what you have now would already elevate the visual interest.
I saw him singing a song to a little girl in her bedroom. It would be much less disturbing if he didn't have the size and proportions of an adult male. And that's just getting you out of pedo territory, he still has to be fun to look at.
I haven't watched everything you've made this far, but another thing that was too static was your camera. Get some natural movement in that thing. Doing that with what you have now would already elevate the visual interest.
I can't remember where this verse is from, I think it got removed from canon:
"I don't hang around with mostly men because I'm gay. It's because men are better than women. Better trained, better equipped...better. Just better! I'm not gay."
For context, this is the previous verse:
"Hi Jesus" -robvalue
"I don't hang around with mostly men because I'm gay. It's because men are better than women. Better trained, better equipped...better. Just better! I'm not gay."
For context, this is the previous verse:
"Hi Jesus" -robvalue
