I find it really interesting that, instead of listening to whom you would like to be your end users, you get extremely defensive and you make a ton of excuses. The bottom line is that you're never going to make any money if you don't take advice on how to improve.
Just like everyone else, I find your videos, not only creepy and inappropriate, but aesthetically offensive. I think you should scrap the project all together, to be honest. Somebody mentioned the forest and trees earlier, and I have to agree: you are not seeing that what you have so far is unprofessional and it's insulting that you would think anyone could take you seriously. The only person you've hired who has done you any good at all is your 2D artist. Your voice over "artist" uses little to no dynamics, rendering Wogglebug's personality pretty much nil, and your automated voices for the other characters are boring and totally amateur. Your 3D graphic "artist" wouldn't even be able to make it in community college, let alone as a professional, and the writing... oh gawds, the writing. NO ONE talks the way any of your characters do, making them totally unrelatable.
Like others, I'm not trying to be mean, although I really do want to shake you in hopes that you would see how utterly hard your project is failing. You obviously don't see it, and even if you've spent only $5 on it, it's too much.
Just like everyone else, I find your videos, not only creepy and inappropriate, but aesthetically offensive. I think you should scrap the project all together, to be honest. Somebody mentioned the forest and trees earlier, and I have to agree: you are not seeing that what you have so far is unprofessional and it's insulting that you would think anyone could take you seriously. The only person you've hired who has done you any good at all is your 2D artist. Your voice over "artist" uses little to no dynamics, rendering Wogglebug's personality pretty much nil, and your automated voices for the other characters are boring and totally amateur. Your 3D graphic "artist" wouldn't even be able to make it in community college, let alone as a professional, and the writing... oh gawds, the writing. NO ONE talks the way any of your characters do, making them totally unrelatable.
Like others, I'm not trying to be mean, although I really do want to shake you in hopes that you would see how utterly hard your project is failing. You obviously don't see it, and even if you've spent only $5 on it, it's too much.
Nolite te bastardes carborundorum.
