RE: For Fantasy/Sci-Fiction Lovers: What Makes You Reada Book?
January 11, 2017 at 8:08 am
(This post was last modified: January 11, 2017 at 8:12 am by ApeNotKillApe.)
(January 10, 2017 at 1:25 pm)Rhondazvous Wrote: Jawan looks for clues in places h e’s not supposed to go and finds himself trapped in a world of swirling mists and hostile subatomic particles. He thinks the queen is crazy to put him in a dungeon and then expect him to save her realm from their prophesied enemy. Until he realizes it’s his own world that’s in danger.
So the protagonist is a resident of magically oriented universe transported to a more 'sciency' one? So magic vs science is a theme yes? That's something the story is ABOUT. Explored in a very literal sense from the sound of it. Could be interesting, but I had to read the blurb a few times just to gauge that.
Communicate the central themes; at this point the details are as not important as the broad concepts and tone. You're trying to convince me that I should care to read your story to begin with.
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