(January 11, 2017 at 3:32 pm)Rhondazvous Wrote: Jawan hadn’t been allowed to see his parents in eight years after the powerful Earth mage apprenticed him, and now he never would. They’d been struck down by the deadly purple plague that ravaged Hadley Town. When his master’s magic fails to find a clue to this mystery ailment, Jawan embarks on his own search, and finds himself trapped in a world one billionth his normal size.
I think just the above is fine without the sub-atomic queen and other plot points.
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