(January 17, 2017 at 3:26 pm)Alex K Wrote: You're an engaging writer with a quite recognizable style (slightly over the top, tongue in cheek pretentious), excellent. I don't care about comic books - at all - and I still wanted to read on.
If I had to pick nits, I would split up some sentences, but other than that...
Yeah, I definitely have a comma fetish. Still working on kicking the habit. Thanks though, it's high praise if you wanted to finish it despite not being interested in the subject
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