Can't hear the lyrics and the message of the video is vague to the point of non-existence. I don't know if that was your intention, but it looks and sounds like a potential school-shooter's fantasy.
On the technical side - guitars are mostly passable, I guess. Preemptively calling your vocals "crappy" doesn't really make the song more listenable. If I were you - I'd either work on the vocals, so that lyrics can be heard (assuming they're not along the lines of "It's fun to shoot kids."), or have an instrumental track, with a video, that has a point.
Or - you know - you could just delete the whole thing, or keep it private. That way you'll be least likely to end up on some sort of register...
On the technical side - guitars are mostly passable, I guess. Preemptively calling your vocals "crappy" doesn't really make the song more listenable. If I were you - I'd either work on the vocals, so that lyrics can be heard (assuming they're not along the lines of "It's fun to shoot kids."), or have an instrumental track, with a video, that has a point.
Or - you know - you could just delete the whole thing, or keep it private. That way you'll be least likely to end up on some sort of register...
"The fact that a believer is happier than a skeptic is no more to the point than the fact that a drunken man is happier than a sober one." - George Bernard Shaw
