RE: School Shooting Range (Original Song)
April 17, 2018 at 9:39 pm
(This post was last modified: April 17, 2018 at 9:48 pm by bennyboy.)
(April 17, 2018 at 9:58 am)Mechaghostman2 Wrote: My vocals are shit, and the animation is a little lazy. Also I didn't give the name of the song in YT itself because I wanted to monetize it. What are your thoughts on it overall?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=evvsmVwuOjo
I think it's a very good song, and the start of a pretty good video. I'd call it proof of concept, right now.
Critically, I'd say:
1) The construction of the song is great.
2) The drums are boxed, unless you are a human metronome. Try humanizing the drum track a little.
3) Your vocals aren't as bad as you think they are, but you'll need to get the right combination of effects to make it sound less geeky. I'd say overdrive + chorus + EQ will be plenty to make those vocals sound shredded. What software are you using to do your tracks?
4) If you played the guitar part live, then kudos. Very nice.
The following is not as good a piece of music as yours, and even the guitar sound is boxed. But just an example of my (equally geeky) voice being made to sound ferocious purely with special effects. I'm only talking about the moment at about 0:10 and again around 1:02, not the rest of the song, which isn't very good. I changed my nerdy "Rawr!" into a proper roaring sound, I think.
