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Poetry slam (or close enough)
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RE: Poetry slam (or close enough)
(June 17, 2018 at 6:18 pm)Kernel Sohcahtoa Wrote: Here's a short poem that I came across.  

Take a Walk Around Yourself


"When you're criticizing others
And are finding, here and there,
A fault or two to speak of
Or a weakness you can tear:
When you're blaming some one's weakness
Or accusing some of pelf -
It's time that you went out
To take a walk around yourself...."

This poem was retrieved via stresslesscountry.com

P.S. I apologize for not reading this aloud.  IMO, if I read this poem aloud, then it would've been ruined: there is a certain type of voice that can move people with poetry, and I do not possess such a voice.

Great stuff. And no need to apologize.
Though allow me to say: hogwash.
I've heard your voice, kernel. Guys want to have your voice and girls want to be with your voice.
"If we go down, we go down together!"
- Your mum, last night, suggesting 69.
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Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Mr.Obvious - June 11, 2018 at 6:24 pm
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Kernel Sohcahtoa - June 17, 2018 at 6:18 pm
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Mr.Obvious - June 18, 2018 at 12:48 am
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Mr.Obvious - October 22, 2018 at 6:18 pm
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by J a c k - November 2, 2018 at 1:31 am
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Mr.Obvious - November 2, 2018 at 6:48 pm
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Dr H - October 25, 2018 at 7:21 pm
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Fireball - October 25, 2018 at 8:48 pm
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by J a c k - October 26, 2018 at 9:03 am
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by J a c k - October 30, 2018 at 1:38 am
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Mr.Obvious - October 30, 2018 at 2:31 am
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by J a c k - November 2, 2018 at 1:27 am
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Mr.Obvious - November 2, 2018 at 8:05 pm
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Dr H - November 2, 2018 at 9:00 pm
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Mr.Obvious - November 2, 2018 at 9:07 pm
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by SteelCurtain - November 2, 2018 at 9:08 pm
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by J a c k - November 26, 2018 at 1:42 pm
RE: Poetry slam (or close enough) - by Mr.Obvious - November 26, 2018 at 6:46 pm

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