So I watched your video, and you've answered none of my questions in the video. All you've done in the video is say that chapter 2 is "a second narrative" or "a separate narrative" and how there's "no timeline" between chapters 2 and 3... Okay? So what? You've not provided answers to anything I asked you in my above post.
Also, some tips for public speaking, from an accomplished public speaker:
-Know what you want to say before you say it. This doesn't require a script, but you should maybe consider a script. I'd prefer to hear someone who sounds a bit more "artificial," making clear, concise points in an orderly fashion than to hear you bumble and stumble over your words for twelve minutes and "sound authentic" because you couldn't be bothered to stick to a script.
-Outline your main points, then support those main points with minor points that help explain and wrap up what you're trying to say.
-Speak clearly. You were sort of mumbling a lot of the time and it was hard to understand what you were saying or where you were trying to go with your ideas.
-Have some emotion in your voice. When you're speaking for any amount of time and want to keep peoples attention, it's advisable to not speak in some droning, monotone voice that makes it sound like you're reciting a grocery list.
Just some constructive criticism. Outside of that, you've not answered the questions I asked, like you promised the video would, and I want my money back.
*virtually slaps Drich
Also, some tips for public speaking, from an accomplished public speaker:
-Know what you want to say before you say it. This doesn't require a script, but you should maybe consider a script. I'd prefer to hear someone who sounds a bit more "artificial," making clear, concise points in an orderly fashion than to hear you bumble and stumble over your words for twelve minutes and "sound authentic" because you couldn't be bothered to stick to a script.
-Outline your main points, then support those main points with minor points that help explain and wrap up what you're trying to say.
-Speak clearly. You were sort of mumbling a lot of the time and it was hard to understand what you were saying or where you were trying to go with your ideas.
-Have some emotion in your voice. When you're speaking for any amount of time and want to keep peoples attention, it's advisable to not speak in some droning, monotone voice that makes it sound like you're reciting a grocery list.
Just some constructive criticism. Outside of that, you've not answered the questions I asked, like you promised the video would, and I want my money back.
*virtually slaps Drich
If you're frightened of dying, and you're holding on, you'll see devils tearing your life away. But if you've made your peace, then the devils are really angels, freeing you from the Earth.
