RE: My Little Project
November 25, 2020 at 11:24 am
(This post was last modified: November 25, 2020 at 11:25 am by The Grand Nudger.)
Needs more tits and I noticed a complete lack of things blowing up.
Constructive criticism - if you're attempting to convey haste you might want to shorten your sentences and tighten the exposition. Pepper it with words that make people exhale to read them. Lots of pronounced h's f's and s's. Gives you a target list for your thesaurus.
Constructive criticism - if you're attempting to convey haste you might want to shorten your sentences and tighten the exposition. Pepper it with words that make people exhale to read them. Lots of pronounced h's f's and s's. Gives you a target list for your thesaurus.
I am the Infantry. I am my country’s strength in war, her deterrent in peace. I am the heart of the fight… wherever, whenever. I carry America’s faith and honor against her enemies. I am the Queen of Battle. I am what my country expects me to be, the best trained Soldier in the world. In the race for victory, I am swift, determined, and courageous, armed with a fierce will to win. Never will I fail my country’s trust. Always I fight on…through the foe, to the objective, to triumph overall. If necessary, I will fight to my death. By my steadfast courage, I have won more than 200 years of freedom. I yield not to weakness, to hunger, to cowardice, to fatigue, to superior odds, For I am mentally tough, physically strong, and morally straight. I forsake not, my country, my mission, my comrades, my sacred duty. I am relentless. I am always there, now and forever. I AM THE INFANTRY! FOLLOW ME!
