RE: Welcome to the oil slick California.
October 6, 2021 at 5:55 pm
(This post was last modified: October 6, 2021 at 5:55 pm by BrianSoddingBoru4.)
(October 6, 2021 at 5:21 pm)Brian37 Wrote:(October 6, 2021 at 3:55 pm)BrianSoddingBoru4 Wrote: None of which changes the fact that it was a horrible parody. Just horrible. Dull, clumsy, unclever, and incredibly drab and awful.
Your poetry - both serious and parodic - sucks.
Boru
That is because you get stuck on one and stupidly assume because of one fart anything I do sucks. Fine with me. I don't give a shit. I have never claimed all of my work is gold, never will. But, have been at this for almost 30 years, and to the point, in person, have had other people ask me to autograph signed prints of my work. So when you stupidly say "YOU SUCK" all I can respond with is "OK, WHICH ONE?"
You, "You lay eggs".
Me, "No shit"
But if you want me to stop because you stupidly focus on my flaws, sorry, not going to happen.
Obviously, I cannot comment on poems of yours I haven’t seen. But the ones you post here - without exception - strike me as poorly constructed, badly thought out, themeless, and pretty childish.
Of course, that’s just my opinion.
Boru
‘I can’t be having with this.’ - Esmeralda Weatherwax
